Saturday, February 15, 2014

Return to #SatSpanks: Part 1 - Anticipation

It's been a while since I've been part of Saturday Spanking Blog Hop, however, that's about to change.  I've got a special treat that's just for this blog hop.  Using the rules of the blog hop, short excerpts, I'll be crafting a hot story of spankings.  Today we're starting with a bit of anticipation...




You are standing in front of me, fully clothed, but emotional bare.  My face is neutral, a mask, a surface that gives you no hint of what is happening just below.   I can see a slight tremor in your hand as you wait for my next command.

“Come.” I say softly, my commands need only to be uttered, not barked.

Slowly you walk forward, your footsteps tiny as you drag out the whole process.  You look up at me with your adorable eyes, a pleading glinting off the surface.  “Please, go easy tonight.”

I raise an eyebrow questioningly as I mull over your impudent request.

Well I hope that tantalizes you.  There's a lot more that I'm getting ready for you, so please make sure you stop by each week.  Part 2 is already up, so check it out.

So perhaps you're also curious as to why I've been quiet?  Well I've been spending the last few months recreating my blog.  Yes there's still some amazingly hot stories for your enjoyment here, but I'm also working on an interview series.  I've posted my first interview with Scarlett Flame a week and a half ago, and tomorrow I'll be hosting LB Shaw.  Please stop by and make sure you check out these and other hot authors I'll be showcasing in the coming weeks.  And don't forget to check out my books on Amazon, iTunes, Smashwords and B&N.

Not enough hot stuff here at Erotic Satisfiction for you?  Well make sure you check out some of these other links and enjoy the rest of the hop.




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22 comments:

  1. Sounds very intriguing. Always looking for a new place to visit.

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    1. Thanks so much. I hope you take a look around, I've got quite a few full stories up.

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  2. Oh please...she so does not mean that! I wouldn't... :)

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    1. Since it's "you" then clearly she doesn't, right?

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  3. The neural face is always a worry. I look forward to more ... Thanks!

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    1. Ah, the neutral face, the blank mask, what could lurk underneath?

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  4. I suspect impudence shall be punished too.

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    1. Love keeping you guessing. Suspicion is that the same as knowledge.

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  5. Welcome back, John.
    You most certainly did build some anticipation here. I enjoy your style of talking directly to the reader. You got my blood sizzling. Looking forward to more!

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    1. Thanks, it's good to be back. Well to write a story specifically focused on 8 lines is a great way to have quite a few cliffhangers. You should enjoy next week's.

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  6. loved the anticipation.

    I also like how you talk directly to the reader.
    Very steamy.
    :)

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    1. Thanks. If you're writing to turn someone on then why not make it about them? Right?

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  7. Glad to have you in the hop! Look forward to reading more.

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    1. Thanks! I've got my pogo-stick all ready so I should be hopping for quite a while. ;)

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  8. Intriguing snippet, John. Makes it even clearer to me that I'm much too soft to ever be a successful, Domme. Pleading just doesn't equate to impudent to me, but I know a request like that, no matter how sweetly it is delivered, would be considered "topping from the bottom" and therefore impudent by most, if not all, Doms.

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    1. If you ever had to get into the role, I'm sure you could figure out how to make it work. You already seem to know the basic principals. You just need a Dom to hover over you while you Domme, teaching you with a carrot and a stick ;)

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    1. I love to tease, so glad I was successful.

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  10. Ah, the impudent request, something every submissive makes from time to time, often to be bratty. I love the dynamic you have portrayed between the two characters.

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    1. Thanks, Will. I've been having fun with this story and I hope everyone likes where it's going.

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