Saturday, February 22, 2014

#SatSpanks Part 2 - Slow Burn

Last week I gave you a little taste of my story that I'm writing for you Saturday Spankings fans.  This week I turn up the flames on this slow burn.



You stand there waiting for my response, your hands grasping each other behind your back, your body swaying absentmindedly.  The way your breasts are thrust out, the way the hem of your dress oscillates around your legs, the way your tongue nervously licks your lips makes my heart beat faster.  Somehow, without saying a word you try to convince me to be lenient with you.

I take a step over to the armless chair behind me and sit down.  I turn my head in your direction and raise an eyebrow.  Immediately you get on your knees and crawl over to sit at my feet obediently waiting for my next instruction.


Your eyes are darting back and forth, not focusing on me.  You know that you took too long to react to me sitting down and that perhaps you did not earn the right for me to be lenient.


Hope you enjoyed your weekly tease.  Make sure to come back next week for the next part of this little saga.

Please make sure to check out the rest of my blog.  There are quite a few full length stories on here and then there's "Playful Punishments" which is currently for sale where ever you love to buy your eBooks.  Three fun spanking stories that you might find enjoyable.  AmazoniTunesSmashwords and B&N.

Last week LB Shaw sat down and had a great conversation with me, make sure you check it out.  And tomorrow, I've got Suzy Ayers who opens up about her writing process and teases us with her newest book that just came out.  She's actually the one who told me about Saturday Spankings Blog Hop so thank her if you enjoy seeing my writing here.

And as always, make sure you stop by and enjoy the other little treats the other bloggers have for you on Saturday Spankings Blog Hop!


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23 comments:

  1. Hot snippet, John! Love his observations of her nervousness.

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    1. So glad you enjoyed it. I'm loving this slow tease.

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  2. Love the 2nd person in this snippet!

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    1. Thanks. I like putting you into the scene.

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  3. You're making me very nervous John. Do you think it's the coffee :)

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  4. She is definitely nervous and I imagine she has every right to be. Nice and hot, thanks.

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    1. He has some tricks up his sleeve, more will be revealed in time...

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  5. Your description of her nervous reaction is excellent. It's easy to picture her. Nicely done, John.

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    1. Thanks so much, Patricia. It's been fun to capture the scene.

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  6. Love the snippet, John. "Perhaps you did not earn the right for me to be lenient."
    Yummy! can't wait for more.

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  7. The POV is so unique, it makes the reader squirm a bit in this snippet. Can't wait for more.

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  8. First time reading your snippet and I absolutely LOVED IT!

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  9. Quite the sexy picture you paint. Yum.

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    1. Thanks, it's great to hear people are enjoying this.

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  10. gorgeous word choice. What a lovely bit of emotion here :)

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    1. I attempt to add some ethos to the proceedings. Glad you noticed.

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  11. That was a tease, and very hot, too!

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  12. Satisfy how the heck did you get the #4 spot? Hmm I promise to be faster next time.LOL kidding! Great job.

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  13. Her nervousness is palpable. I enjoy watching her, but I wouldn't want to be her. Great snippet, John.

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