With your body twisted in my grasp, your fingers digging into my skin, you know that the moment is at hand. You are aware of the movement of my hand and I feel your body tense against me. You hold the tension for as long as you can, the muscles in your buttocks are tight and firm, but you can't keep that level of tension up.
SMACK
The sound of my hand hitting your body rings out and fills the room. Your body jumps forward, however with your hair in my tight grip you are not going anywhere. Instead you feel the sting on your ass and in your scalp as I prepared for the next spank.
Again your body jumps as the sting of my hand spreads through your ass cheeks. After the squeals of pain are drained from your mouth for the moment you say, “Thank you, Sir. I deserved that.”
Did you like the first taste against your tender ass cheeks? Well now that we've started to heat things up, I bet you don't want this to stop. Well don't worry, there's a new snippet next week and I think you'll like what I have in store for you.
Thanks everyone for all the wonderful comments on the first five parts of this series. I really have been enjoying reading and responding to all of them. I hope that you haven't just been content to read these eight lines each week. There's so much for you to discover on my blog. I'm really proud of all the interviews I've done. Some very talented authors have taken the time to sit down with me and have a real, honest to goodness conversation with me. These aren't a standard series of questions, and everyone has opened up and really had some personal stories. Make sure you check out last week's with LA Cloutier and of course tomorrow there's a new one with Jenna Fox.
Until then, make sure you check out my Amazon page and try one of my eBooks. I do this full time right now, so ever sale means a lot. And of course Saturday Spanks has just begun. Don't forget to read the other wonderful blogs this week. I may take a break next week, but either way I hope you have a good one!
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Aaaah, not only do I get a fine spanking, but a hair pull too??? Yum. Heaven.
ReplyDeleteWell he has to keep her in position, doesn't he?
DeleteSuch bold snippet--and intro too!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteHey, John, be sure to post your interview with Jenna Fox in the Spanking Fiction group tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteReally love the innovation with the second person!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you're liking my voice. I've tried to hone it so it works for as many readers as possible.
DeleteUnusual POV. Like the hand in the hair, not going anywhere., Definitely not.
ReplyDeleteYou don't want her to fall of his lap at an inopportune time, do you? Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteA well, prepared and wantonness in the tethered hair and spanking taking place here... and appropriately she responds "Thank you, Sir, I deserved that"... a nice glimpse at etiquette and life-styled Dominance and submission...
ReplyDeleteShe's well trained, that's for sure. He wouldn't have it any other way.
DeleteNothing better than a grateful spankee ;) (and a squealer, come to mention it ;) )
ReplyDeleteYes, and the punishment is just getting started... thanks so much for your kind words.
DeleteVery sensual John. The piece with the hair is the best part of it. Well, that and the spanking itself...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. I'm glad that detail went over so well.
DeleteHot, hot, hot. Love that she thanks him.
ReplyDeleteWell that's what a good girl does, right? And at this point she wants to be good.
DeleteI like her response to the spanking!
ReplyDeleteShe's having fun. I'm glad you are as well.
DeleteWhat a fun POV! Immediately immerses the reader.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteHi John! Yay hair pulling is the best. ;)
ReplyDeleteI thought you might like that detail, Suzy.
DeleteVery hot snippet John! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. So glad you enjoyed it!
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