Saturday, October 12, 2013

Playing with Language #SatSpanks

Well I am personally excited about joining everyone for the Saturday Spankings Blog Hop.  I joined in on all the fun two weeks ago, and everyone was so welcoming to a new member to your circle. Thanks.

For today's post, I'm going to do a little snippet from a story I posted a few weeks ago. Sometimes I get tired of doing "Serious" erotica.  Sometimes I want to be more playful and try something a little different.  I was trying to come up with new ideas that I could try and I thought of the word, Subservient. Which to me made me think of a Sub Servant, ie someone who sells sandwiches...  Well as erotic as food can be, I thought that was a great inspiration for something more fun and lighthearted.

So today we are joining Ashley as she seduces the male main character right after he received his sub.

Then she looked up at me with her doe eyes and said, “Besides, seeing how happy you are makes getting in trouble with my daddy worth it.”

I finished chewing and asked, “Why would your father be upset with you?”

“Oh, daddy is very strict!  He’s always telling me ‘I don’t care if you are college senior, if you’re living under my roof you are going to follow my rules!’.  And now that it’s past closing I’m going to be home past my curfew.  I know that I’m going to have a sore bum tonight.”  As she spoke she shifted and started rubbing her ass through the fabric of her skirt, as if soothing it now would prevent the sting latter on.

“I don’t think he’d spank you if you explain to him that you were stuck at work.”  I said, actually concerned for Ashley.


“You really think so, Mister?”  She put her finger to her mouth and kind of bit down on it as though she was thinking.  “Maybe you could help me practice my story?”  Her voice had this lilt to it that I couldn't say no to.

Did that tempt you?  If so, I urge you to check out the rest of the story here.

On a side note... I'd like to remind everyone that they can find my collection of Erotic Spanking stories, Playful Punishments, on Smashwords and Amazon.

And make sure to check out the rest of the Saturday Spanks Blog Hop! :)

34 comments:

  1. Sub- I hadn't gotten to thinking of food but it's early yet! Cute snippet.

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  2. You know I liked this John...Do I really need to comment lol ~ Suzy

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  3. You're a newbie like me. This snippet leaves me wanting more.....

    Leigh Smith (aka Sunny Girl)

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    1. Glad to hear it, that's kind of the point.

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  4. I wonder if he's going to regret his answer once she starts testing her story out on him. I bet she's going to tease the daylights out of him... ~smirks~
    Nice tease, John.

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    1. Why would he regret his answer? It's just getting good... ;)

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  5. Welcome, this does make me want to know exactly what this story is going to be.

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    1. Well the rest of the story is up on the blog, so you can check it out.

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  6. I also didn't realize you meant sub as in a sandwich... shows where my mind is! I liked this snippet :)

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    1. What can I say? Sex and food go together sometimes...

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  7. I have the advantage - I read the full story on your blog recently and know where it's going. Hot and fun story - well done

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    1. Thanks Tara. Appreciate you taking the time to check out my stories.

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  8. I wonder what kind of "Daddy" she's talking about. And I know what you mean about word play. I have a story called "Subterfudge" in a food/BDSM anthology. It's a play on a variety of words. I guess "Sub" really lends itself. Lol!

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    1. Yeah, Sub is a word that is easy to use for double entendres. It's also amazing how many different names there are for Sub...

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  9. I love reverse awakenings, John. This is great!

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    1. I never really thought about it like that. Does that make this comment a reverse awakening?

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  10. What a tease she is especially with the finger in the mouth. Either Daddy or Mister needs to take care that straightaway, I think. Nice snippet.

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  11. I like fun, playful stories, too. Thanks for cute snippet! Can't wait to read more.

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  12. Hmmm this sounds like it could be my "How to" manual...lol

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    1. It was nice to do something fun and light for a change.

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